Hi! My name is Takuya. I am 19 years old. I am a KGU college student. I am from Japan. I live in Kumamoto. Do you know Kumamoto? It is very great place. I like Kumamoto’s water. Kumamoto’s water is very delicious.
My hobby is listening to music and playing soccer. My favorite singer is “Dreams come true”. Do you know them? They are famous singers in Japan. Their songs are very good. Their songs make me happy. If you have not listened to their songs, please listen to them. I also like to play soccer because I belonged to soccer club when I was a junior high school student. Playing soccer is very fun. Have you ever played soccer? If you can play it, let’s play it together.
My favorite food is Takoyaki. Do you know Takoyaki? Takoyaki is Japanese food. It is very delicious food. I think Japanese food is very delicious, for example, konomiyaki, atto, udon, shusi, misosiru and takoyaki. Have you ever eaten them? You should have them.
My family members are five, my father, my mother, my older sister and my younger sister. My family is very lively. My house is always noisy. But I am happy to spend time with our family. I want to introduce our family to you.
My student life is very good. Kumamoto Gakuen University makes me fun. I have a lot of good friends. They are very interesting and make me happy. I like my friends very much. My friends are very important for me.
My department is foreign language. Foreign language department is very good. It can learn English a lot. I like English. So I am glad to learn English. I want to use an English better. I study speaking, writing, reading, listening of English. I must study English more. I have a lot of things to do. So I will do my best.
I belong to club. The club is ERC. ERC is Economic Research club. I like this club very much. We are very friendly. We often enjoy doing many things for example, we go to the sea, mountain, river, lake, play hide and seek, driving, go shopping, have a food, playing the TV game, drink in the bar, talk about many things and help each other. My club is a lot of members. So I have many friends. I want to enjoy my club more. I like ERC very much.
My part-time job is cram school teacher. Cram school teacher is hard for me because it is difficult for me to teach for children. So I must study many subjects. I am not good at teaching for children but I want to make money. So I do my best.
My student life is good but I am not satisfied. I want to do a lot of things. So I will do variety experience in the future. And I want to enjoy student life.
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Hi Takuya,
返信削除I hope you'll pardon me for reusing a comment that I left on one of your classmates essays (in italics, below). This is one of those occasions when what I wrote to her/him is almost a perfect fit for you, too
I imagine this essay is 1-01a, your first draft (due April 12), but find nothing resembling 1-01b (due April 17), which should include additional information in response to questions and suggestions that classmates or peers post in comments on your first draft.
Each essay needs at least two labels, either:
a. drafts and essays, or
b. essays and revisions.
Both essays introducing yourself ought to comprise several paragraphs, each one focusing on a single topic.... Typing two (2) returns at the end of each paragraph will create white spaces to guide readers' eyes to the beginning of each new topic.
Cheers. (pab, April 23, 2010 14:17:43 JST)